17A - Elevator Pitch No. 2
View my second elevator pitch for Prescription Place here.
***Please note: I just moved in to a new apartment and I have quite a way to go in terms of getting furniture situated, so I had to make-do with the camera on the window sill.***
Your feedback is very much appreciated!
Thank you Victor and Raymond for the kind comments on the first elevator pitch. I usually notice when somebody is talking too fast, and I can tell that audiences generally enjoy listening to a slower delivery of speech.
Raymond, I really like your idea about advertising on the website. This could definitely be another stream of revenue to help fund R&D for the business. However, I feel that ads may be a nuisance to subscribers. Maybe there could be a tier system for subscribers. A more expensive subscription could provide users with an ad-free experience.
Jenna, I think you did a great job on the pitch. You had the perfect lighting that made the video easier to view. You said that audiences seem to enjoy listening to slower speeches, but I personally think finding the right in between is the good speed. I personally thought your speed was a little too slow and some people might loss focus if someone is speaking too slow. Having a conversational speed would be perfect. My second pitch was delivered a little too fast, so I'll definitely keep this in mind next time.
ReplyDeleteMichelle Lam
Jenna,
ReplyDeleteOnce again you delivered an excellent pitch. The camera on the window sill worked very well and you shouldn't be worried that it would be a problem. Your room was lit up nicely and you spoke at a speed that was perfect. I also liked how you used body gestures and your voice to create positive points about what you were speaking about. I think you did a great job and you seemed comfortable talking in front of a camera.
Great Job!